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It looks all right, but you really need to work on a lot. There's very, very little done and you should add lots of things, like attacks, items, badguy variations, etc. If you've ever played fable, you should also add a good/evil meter where your character changes depending on what you do, exactly like the game. It looks pretty cool though, but you have a long way to go! G'luck.
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Wow, that was some real art. Great job, especiall with the drawing of St1k. You really portrayed his depressing, retarded-looking, semi-emo, punk side. Congratulations Tator!
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Thank you sir, you are a true connoisseur of art.
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Congrats RedNoseDonkey! Wow, that was really amazing! It was genius of you guys to have it kind of like a collab, plus I liked your little treasure hunt. Keep up the Edible Castle Extravaganza and have them keep coming. I can see the improvement by the way, and this is my favorite yet. Again, good job!
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I was getting ready to write how much you suck for not making a naughty aristocrat's joke, but then i got to the end. thats hilarious tho. I have to say, only for people who know the joke and/or have seen the movie, does this make any sense...
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I really like it man. Your girlfriends a pretty lucky girl! I really like the way you did a kind of false rotoscoping as he gets off the train, and where you two hug and the colors just flow out to fill everything, that was genius. Congrats on the year btw. :)
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yeah I did the rotoscoping ages ago and its a bit dodgy, but i didnt have time to fix it!
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I feel as if there was nothing to this. It was much too simple and boring. I mean, there was nothing to it, and at one point, you can barely do anything because you have too many. Make a bit more to it.
Author's Response:
Eh, it's supposed to be relaxing and almost trace-inducing. You can't have an overly complicated game achieve that. Thanks for your opinion anyways...
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I played this last night on Armor Games and was AMAZED. You clearly are one of the best game makers out there. It's great how you were able to use hundreds of baddies at once, yet you had no lag, along with some great artwork. You should keep up the good work. I actually can't even come up with many ways to improve the game.
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I say you just ripped of the One Hour Frame by Frame Collab, just worse. You need more parts, time, and make it longer, it was way too short.
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I liked it a lot. It was really funny to watch and the animation style is very creative. I like how your mouths go beyond the face. You're also really good with showing people at different angles I realized. Keep it up. Nurses face in the last one was the funniest thing :).
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It's kinda smooth, but I don't particularly like this animation style. I mean, it is a style, but it's not a great one. I'd say if you colored it in it would be much better. Keep it up though, I think you could be pretty good if you colored it in.
P.S. Reality-monkey (poster below me) is an AMAZING animator...some of the smoothest stuff I've ever seen.
Author's Response:
thanks for the comment, and thanks for the constructive ctritic, that obviously worked more than the other comments.
And yeah, i'll apologyze with R-Monkey, because i said too many words that doesn't have any meaning with his comment, but is not very nice if you don't critic and you said "it's a stupid idea" that's offensive, and i think this place is full of genius of flash animation, R-Monkey is one of them and you too, but i'm not, and i only want constructive critics and not destructive, i submit here for that reason, you are good animators, and i expect some good critics, like the one you did.
If all the people here start saying "screw you""this sucks" then all the meaning of this site goes down.
Sorry for the long reply, and thanks for your comment.
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