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It's kinda smooth, but I don't particularly like this animation style. I mean, it is a style, but it's not a great one. I'd say if you colored it in it would be much better. Keep it up though, I think you could be pretty good if you colored it in.
P.S. Reality-monkey (poster below me) is an AMAZING animator...some of the smoothest stuff I've ever seen.
Author's Response:
thanks for the comment, and thanks for the constructive ctritic, that obviously worked more than the other comments.
And yeah, i'll apologyze with R-Monkey, because i said too many words that doesn't have any meaning with his comment, but is not very nice if you don't critic and you said "it's a stupid idea" that's offensive, and i think this place is full of genius of flash animation, R-Monkey is one of them and you too, but i'm not, and i only want constructive critics and not destructive, i submit here for that reason, you are good animators, and i expect some good critics, like the one you did.
If all the people here start saying "screw you""this sucks" then all the meaning of this site goes down.
Sorry for the long reply, and thanks for your comment.
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This isn't the best game I've ever seen, but it's surprisingly catchy, and you got me to play it ALL the way through! So congrats on that. I was surprised that I did, but I was hoping that there might be a high scores in the end, since I missed only eight or so. One problem was that at one point they began to overlap, so that wasn't great. Also, try and make it so that you catch it on time with the music, not it falls with the music.
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This was pretty good, and I know that you've always had a knack for game-making, but one thing I might do would be to increase the game size and have more to it. Also, try and have something where you can have each comet go off another comet and collide with one another.
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I think that you have to be one of the funniest people I've ever met. I'm going to take off of your idea and remember that if I see a joke game on TV that I can still make it, but originally. Even though the game wasn't ACTUALLY great, I love you man. One thing I'd say was make the graphics over and trace over the bitmaps. But it was still amazing!
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Hey guys, I really like this. I remember being in the OHFBFC and that was fun, but I can't really imagine what it would be like to do this all day. I really think you all did a great job and I'll try to join in on the next one. SpaceWalk FTW!
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Thanks :D
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Oh dan, dan, dan....you and your little games never cease to amaze me. :P. It's gonna to amazing on newgrounds, I can tell you that. Dicks, Children, and Dan Paladin....oh jesus, it's almost like God had created it all by himself. I like the art too, it's just hard to stay alive.
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Wow, all my 5s are belong to this. I only have like one or two suggestions. One is that I know that everyone hates sprites a lot, but you should definetaly stay with them. I really do want to see what it would look like though if you didn't use sprites. Second suggestion is that you need a lot more of that 3d type thing with luigi. Oh my god that was one of the coolest things I've seen in a while. It was almost like Super Mario Bros Z. Keep it up definetaly.
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I can't believe that I actually just watched that whole freaking thing! That was so horrid and disgusting, although it was fairly funny wher you really think about it. I am really kind of scared now. A few things you might work on are having their mouths move instead of just saying the text and also speed it up a little. I don't mean speedy...you know...I just mean that they seem to talk soooo slowly yet theres no emotion, so it's not worth that extra time.
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I like how you were able to use such simple graphics with some gradients, just to make it look like master chief and then be able to make it really funny. I feel like I may have seen you showing this on the forums or something, because I remember seeing the first scene where he pushes the door down over the guy. I like video game parodies too, so you got me there. Can't wait to see the whole thing!
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You guys have to start adding a little bit more of animation to your movies. I've noticed this in a lot of movies recently, where it looks like it could be 5 fps, even though i know its probably 20 or 24. It just needs a few more frames inbetween the others. So instead of From left to right, you have left middle right, or even left, left middle, middle, middle right, right. Also, the voices are a little corny. Try voice actors in the Flash and Audio forums!
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