I like the song mostly
I like almost all of the song, the only problem is that I think that none of your beats were really in the same key, especially the one that you took from Linkin Park. I think that they should all be on the same key and chord. I think thats mostly all that you need to work on. Basically I like all of the rest of your song and I think that you used just a few too many stops, and not enough the were really useful like the one around 1:50 where you bring in a bunch of more tracks right after. I really like it though, keep going!