El-Presidente's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Newgrounds Sketchbook]

Well...

The thing was very hastily done, the art was not good, and it was terribly put together. Stick to submitting to the art portal until you're able to really have a "sketchbook." That's what the portal's there for anyways.

EKublai responds:

To each his own, the focus wasn't really on the art though, only part of it was for the art.

[An Animator's Dilemma]

Varied

While some of the jokes were kind of funny, there were a few that were too overused, the voice recordings were pretty bad, and the animation was below par. If you worked on it some more, it would be much better. Nice work though anyway.

And that's impossible, animators can't play hockey.

PJ-Olzow responds:

its a born talent of all canadians

[I'm a Creep]

Pretty good, could use work

I did like the song in general and your artwork is pretty nice. I might have to say that you should work on your tweening and FBF a bit more in the sense that you would want to work on smoothness. It's a little choppy in areas and that detracts from this in general. I'm pretty sure that the original of this song is by Radio Head too. [just a btw]

Ticketyt0ck responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Fate and a Full Moon]

Nice job

I really like it man. Your girlfriends a pretty lucky girl! I really like the way you did a kind of false rotoscoping as he gets off the train, and where you two hug and the colors just flow out to fill everything, that was genius. Congrats on the year btw. :)

Jimp responds:

yeah I did the rotoscoping ages ago and its a bit dodgy, but i didnt have time to fix it!

[X-MAS Mario VS Mouser]

Its okay

It's kinda smooth, but I don't particularly like this animation style. I mean, it is a style, but it's not a great one. I'd say if you colored it in it would be much better. Keep it up though, I think you could be pretty good if you colored it in.

P.S. Reality-monkey (poster below me) is an AMAZING animator...some of the smoothest stuff I've ever seen.

Steel-the-hedgehog responds:

thanks for the comment, and thanks for the constructive ctritic, that obviously worked more than the other comments.
And yeah, i'll apologyze with R-Monkey, because i said too many words that doesn't have any meaning with his comment, but is not very nice if you don't critic and you said "it's a stupid idea" that's offensive, and i think this place is full of genius of flash animation, R-Monkey is one of them and you too, but i'm not, and i only want constructive critics and not destructive, i submit here for that reason, you are good animators, and i expect some good critics, like the one you did.
If all the people here start saying "screw you""this sucks" then all the meaning of this site goes down.
Sorry for the long reply, and thanks for your comment.

[The 24 Hour FBF Comp]

Great Job

Hey guys, I really like this. I remember being in the OHFBFC and that was fun, but I can't really imagine what it would be like to do this all day. I really think you all did a great job and I'll try to join in on the next one. SpaceWalk FTW!

[Pico Idol]

Sound

I know that you wanted it to sound like that, but I think you still could've had it better the other way. I think that Tom does sound and look a little like that lol and hey...STAMPER DOESNT HAVE MUCH HAIR AND YOU FORGOT the HUGE COCK STICKING OUT OF HIS STOMACH!

Rudy responds:

Ahah Tom does sound and looks like that very much so.

Oh and easily mistaken! UGH! I knew I forgot something. And of course, it was that damn cock out of Stamper's chest.

Tsk Tsk.

[Xionic Revolution]

This review was one of the best

This was a great movie with everything getting 10's...next time could you have longer times with the subtitles up so we can have a while to read them and look at the pictures..greatjob otherwise, how'd you do it so fast

Xionico responds:

thats always a problem , i read too fast x_x