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Nice job

I really like it man. Your girlfriends a pretty lucky girl! I really like the way you did a kind of false rotoscoping as he gets off the train, and where you two hug and the colors just flow out to fill everything, that was genius. Congrats on the year btw. :)

Jimp responds:

yeah I did the rotoscoping ages ago and its a bit dodgy, but i didnt have time to fix it!

OHFBFC Ripoff?

I say you just ripped of the One Hour Frame by Frame Collab, just worse. You need more parts, time, and make it longer, it was way too short.

Creative and Funny

I liked it a lot. It was really funny to watch and the animation style is very creative. I like how your mouths go beyond the face. You're also really good with showing people at different angles I realized. Keep it up. Nurses face in the last one was the funniest thing :).

Its okay

It's kinda smooth, but I don't particularly like this animation style. I mean, it is a style, but it's not a great one. I'd say if you colored it in it would be much better. Keep it up though, I think you could be pretty good if you colored it in.

P.S. Reality-monkey (poster below me) is an AMAZING animator...some of the smoothest stuff I've ever seen.

Steel-the-hedgehog responds:

thanks for the comment, and thanks for the constructive ctritic, that obviously worked more than the other comments.
And yeah, i'll apologyze with R-Monkey, because i said too many words that doesn't have any meaning with his comment, but is not very nice if you don't critic and you said "it's a stupid idea" that's offensive, and i think this place is full of genius of flash animation, R-Monkey is one of them and you too, but i'm not, and i only want constructive critics and not destructive, i submit here for that reason, you are good animators, and i expect some good critics, like the one you did.
If all the people here start saying "screw you""this sucks" then all the meaning of this site goes down.
Sorry for the long reply, and thanks for your comment.

Great Job

Hey guys, I really like this. I remember being in the OHFBFC and that was fun, but I can't really imagine what it would be like to do this all day. I really think you all did a great job and I'll try to join in on the next one. SpaceWalk FTW!

Wow...

Wow, all my 5s are belong to this. I only have like one or two suggestions. One is that I know that everyone hates sprites a lot, but you should definetaly stay with them. I really do want to see what it would look like though if you didn't use sprites. Second suggestion is that you need a lot more of that 3d type thing with luigi. Oh my god that was one of the coolest things I've seen in a while. It was almost like Super Mario Bros Z. Keep it up definetaly.

AWESOME and FUNNY

I like how you were able to use such simple graphics with some gradients, just to make it look like master chief and then be able to make it really funny. I feel like I may have seen you showing this on the forums or something, because I remember seeing the first scene where he pushes the door down over the guy. I like video game parodies too, so you got me there. Can't wait to see the whole thing!

Animation! Animation! Animation!

You guys have to start adding a little bit more of animation to your movies. I've noticed this in a lot of movies recently, where it looks like it could be 5 fps, even though i know its probably 20 or 24. It just needs a few more frames inbetween the others. So instead of From left to right, you have left middle right, or even left, left middle, middle, middle right, right. Also, the voices are a little corny. Try voice actors in the Flash and Audio forums!

This doesn't deserve very high

Sorry, but this was really bad. I do think that theres so much work that could be done. Firstly, when you make drawings and just draw a new line each frame, make sure that it looks good and not just really badly drawn. Secondly, there was almost no animation, it was just you hitting f6 basically and drawing a gun or something . I think this may get through, but deserves a low score where improvement is needed.

nice one

nice Flash, especially on such short notice!

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